Lord Anzius

Have you noticed the "check spelling" button on the right side of the text box, just above the box???? Remember the space after comas and other punctuation marks, always spell ...

NEVER READ ERAGON!!! AAAGH :shock: :shock: Read it... NOW! :smt118 When the next one is out, you can just pm me again and I'll give some crits... OK?

WOW! Cool 8) some mistakes still, I'll just list them down: "Who am I? Why can't I remember? He racked his brains trying to find any memory of him, you ...

Thanx for the crits. Kiitti :D

yes I do. MUHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAH :twisted:

He stood by the door, with sweating hands. He opened the chamber door, and fell silent once more. He saw it move, and wondered if the monster would disapprove. He ...

Not in the historical section (it is a world of fancy :P ) The story is good, but what the person above said is correct. Do not write the dialogue ...

or because humans are too stupid and arrogant to listen to others.

Alan "I have a small hut close by." Alan said to Ryder who was starting to set camp Alan pointed to the east "It's about three hundred meters from me; ...

Ever heard of the fact that God will not alter with our lives anymore. He gave us his word for it. God never answers dirrectly, he gives you choises and ...

Alan: Alan looked at the two people. The man seemed to be looking at the woman all the time, while the woman's gaze sifted from the man to Alan. "Ahem." ...

Well written. Not too short, long enough for a prologue but, you jump too much: from pig dung to a giggling girl etc. Sabbath day (what world is that???????" :) ...

ALAN: Alan had been going around the island for days. He had not seen a soul since he arrived, thus he was startled to see a man running at him ...

Maradomin He sat on his chair, when Laviant ran inside the tent. "Sir!" Maradomin turned around "Yes Laviant?" Maradomin asked. He lit the candle again. Laviant caught his breath, and ...

can you still join? :shock: Name: Alan Mildstream Age: 20 Sex: Male Description: Free spirited guy who likes to take it loose, But if there is work to be done ...